Welcome to our blog. Who are we? Where do we come from? What do we hold true? What are our journeys, passions, dreams, and goals? Join our blog and walk with us on this poetry path.
Answer is a very interesting, but some of the words could be change into more interesting words like light can be changed to portable! So you could make a few word changes! But other than that Answer is a very nice poem!
I read your poem "Answer"and was reminded right away about an abandoned ship which sat in the mudflats in front on my childhood home in Milbridge. Now I wonder what the boat's "life" has been all about. I have no answer for that but your poem has me wondering now. Thanks for writing about an old boat left to rot. I guess boats have a kind of life to them like people.
Dear Kyle Hirsch, I read your poem "Answer" and I thought it was fabulous! I loved how you ended it with a question, and it got me thinking, "What are they really doing there?" It also reminded me of someone in a harbor during a storm with an abandoned ship. You had a great word choice Ex: beached was a good word.
"The way you were beached. The way you outlasted the storm that the night brought. Your contents were not so lucky."
Dear Kyle, I love your poem "Awnsers". I simply adored how you said "The way you rotting planks creaked and moaned for someone to remember you." It was so deep with emotion and passon, it was like I was droning in the sorrow the boat felt, than I broke free with hope and happeness when the boys found you! I truly adore your poem! From, Juliana
I finally relized the nararater was talking to the ship at the end, I liked how the writer did that.
ReplyDeleteAnswer is a very interesting, but some of the words could be change
ReplyDeleteinto more interesting words like light can be changed to portable! So you could make a few word changes! But other than that Answer is a very nice poem!
Andrew(me) posted the comment about the narrator talking to the ship.
ReplyDeleteDear Kyle,
ReplyDeleteI read your poem "Answer"and was reminded right away about an abandoned ship which sat in the mudflats in front on my childhood home in Milbridge. Now I wonder what the boat's "life" has been all about. I have no answer for that but your poem has me wondering now. Thanks for writing about an old boat left to rot. I guess boats have a kind of life to them like people.
From,
Mrs. Leighton
Dear Kyle Hirsch,
ReplyDeleteI read your poem "Answer" and I thought it was fabulous! I loved how you ended it with a question, and it got me thinking, "What are they really doing there?" It also reminded me of someone in a harbor during a storm with an abandoned ship. You had a great word choice Ex: beached was a good word.
"The way you were beached.
The way you outlasted the storm
that the night brought.
Your contents were not so lucky."
That part was a great part.
From,
Tori J
Dear Kyle,
ReplyDeleteI love your poem "Awnsers". I simply adored how you said "The way you rotting planks creaked and moaned for someone to remember you." It was so deep with emotion and passon, it was like I was droning in the sorrow the boat felt, than I broke free with hope and happeness when the boys found you! I truly adore your poem!
From,
Juliana